Overall this hack is weird.
Already, the overworld is not changed or even the names of the levels.
And the levels are not changed.
Finally to come to the only modified level.
It's really not good.
Overall, it's flat and the level design is not very good.
Putting the foreground like
this is really not very pretty that gives what's called a "
cut-off"
If we modify a little, so that it's correct you should do like
this
It's the same
here. There's a cut-off at the end, do
like this to make it correct.
Also, I said previously that it was empty and flat, look if we take
this place.
It should be made less flat, prettier, like
this, you see the difference?
Finally, put a platform with the goal because in the current case the level is not finishable because there is no platform below the goal, and remember to put
this to indicate the point goal.
You started Lunar Magic recently, everyone at these beginnings.
In order to improve you I advise you to read
the FAQ, read all that conserves the "SMW Hacking"
And to improve your Level Design, I advise you to read
this tutorial
I hope I have been helpful and good luck for the future!