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Mario & La sphère de Toad 2 - Final Version available

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Hello SMWC ^ ^
I present to you my hack
"Mario & La sphère de Toad 2"
Here's the story

"Bowser HAS stolen
the magic of the
Sphere
Hurry up before it
Reduces the world
into chaos "

Here are some screenshot

Extra Night ( 1-1 )


Dark Forest ( 1-2 )



Black Rain ( 1-3 )


Sunrise to the sea ( 1-4 )


Castle 1 ( 1-C )



That's the moment


demo 1 : http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6615


And here you will see the progress of the hack


World 1: 100%
World 2: 100%
World 3: 100%
World 4: 100%
World 5: 100%
World 6: 100%
World S: 100%
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Ooh, this doesn't look bad. By the looks of it, you're going for a dark atmosphere which is nice.

The only questionable things would be those clouds you can walk on - they honestly don't look like you could walk on them and it doesn't help that they're originally background tiles.

And the palette in the last screenshot looks off too.

Anyway, nice work, and I like your Shy Guys :3
Thank you, Eevee
Here's more screenshots

Grassland Plains 1 ( 2-1 )


Desert Plains ( 2-2 )


Epic platform ( 2-3 )


Grassland Plains 2 ( 2-4 )


Koopa Beach ( 2-5 )


Castle 2 ( C-2 )


Here!
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Well, I don't understand why you're using those oddly-shaped walls of dirt, and a ceiling if the level is supposed to be a "grassland plains". It looks more like a rocky mountain right now, especially with that BG. Also, avoid covering enemies with objects (like that Piranha Plant) unless you set priority over Mario as well. But in this case, don't forget to make the enemy partially visible as well, otherwise the player may take unfair damage.



I strongly suggest sticking with only one default FG GFX, for consistency purposes. You started using the redrawn one (as seen in Extra Night ( 1-1 )), then you suddenly abandoned it to use the above instead. Also, the colors of the ground (esp. the grass' shadow) and the yoshi tree are off in the 1st screenshot. Same with the BG in the 2nd screenshot, you see, the shading in the mountains' borders aren't using the correct gradient because of bad color choices. The BG could also use some different colors, as they blend a bit with the FG.



I don't really understand the gimmick you're trying to achieve here, because there's really no need for those YI platforms, as the player doesn't need to backtrack at all, considering the level is pretty linear. That is, there's no challenge involved with those platforms as they'll probably never disappear, because no one will jump back on them. Consider putting platforms with the counter set for "1" instead of "2", or putting some backtracking in the level, unless I'm missing something in this level that I'm not aware of... #ab{:P}



Hummm... Yeah, major graphical clash here. The cartoony ambiance certainly doesn't go well with the redrawn sprites, as they're somewhat realistic looking.

The last 2 screens from your last post look alright for me.

Good luck with your project!
Originally posted by Eevee
I like your Shy Guys :3

He didn't draw them.


Anyway I was going to give some feedback but Gloomy is so best that he gave ☆★actually good criticism★☆ and covered everything I was going to say.

Yes, but I was a little tweaked
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Hahaha aurel le nian-cat continu comme sa tu fait du bon boulot ;)
Your layout has been removed.
Merci Yayayoub ^^( Thanks yayayoub ^^ )
This is the world 3

Snow Hills ( 3-1 )


Frozen cave ( 3-2 )


Fast and Slippery ( 3-3 )


Castle ( C-3 ) -- Under construction --


This world is short but there are 2 secret exits
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Originally posted by Aurel509


Well, thank you for using my graphics, but the redrawn style enemies and my graphics style.. just don't go well with each other. You can use ExGFX for them.

Your levels in world 3 also are nice, I think it is an ice world, am I right? I like them, but the palette of level C-3 doesn't look too good. If you change the ground's colors to grey, I think it would be nice. That's all I can say, good luck with this project!
Thank you and of nothing at once.
Yes I know this phrase mean anything
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Sorry for the double post
I hope I would not do a triple post
So here is a level

" Lake Poisoned " (World 4-1)
Video













Enjoy !
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While the level design in general seems quite nice, you might want to avoid repetition in small areas. Also, I find the palette blue sky and the water below the land to be rather unfitting. Changing them is the best course of action in my opinion.
I guess.. you mean "Poison Lake" or "Poisonous Lake" ? Anyways, nice job with the palette, however, I.. don't really like the "lake poisoned". It is hard to see the difference between colors. Just my opinion, but I suggest you to change them. About level design, your level design is quite nice! It is challenging, fun and has nice decoration too. However, there are repetition in some areas, not much; but still can't say it does not exist. Good luck!
This looks good keep it up. #smw{:TUP:}
RMG Productions
I changed the palette, it's better?

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Le hack a l'air vraiment bien tu l'as bien travaillé le hack continu comme sa quand tu l'aura sorti il fera un carton ton hack :)
Thank you mamlazizou
Good for the moment the world 4 and still in preparation
screenshots from as the castle 4 will be finalized

Also when I would finish the world 4 , beta testers will test the 4 worlds
it is still necessary that there are beta-testers xd



Sorry for spelling mistakes I do not speak English but French
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Sorry For the Double post
So that there will be desert (So the world 5) will be present in the hack
Here the overworld



So that!
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Originally posted by Aurel509
Sorry For the Double post
So that there will be desert (So the world 5) will be present in the hack
Here the overworld



So that!


Nice graphics, but the shapes don't look too good. They are just block lines, and there are some little mistakes here and there. I will show them if you want.
Well, just going by the screenshots, this looks like a decent hack you have there.
Can't really say much yet, but the overworld sure look nice and so do the levels I've seen so far.
It this one of those vanilla hacks with redrawn graphics? Never mind, I see the "X" sprites there xD, so I guess you also got some custom stuff going.
Maybe you'll share some ingame screens with us, so we can see the sprites in action?
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