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Mario and the 1-up of life. [VIDEO!!]

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Hello guys, i'm making an hack again and i have a story now.
While Mario was away for a short time, Bowser kidnapped Peach and killed her, now the mushroom kingdom has no princess.
Mario went to the wise old toad to get advice.
He replied:"Mario, go search for the 1-up of life, its an legendary mushroom who can get anyone - not just you and Luigi - to life, hidden in the darkest core in the whole mushroom kingdom."

well anywayz, go to the screens:


















and post 500
I don't see the screens.

Anyway, try "The new plot" and it goes something like:

"Oh no! Princess Peach quit! Mario must find a new plot!"
Try pressing the link, a cool slideshow will pop up.
Are you really that lazy? You can't even make a name and story for your own hack. Wow.
Mmh, its just that i am not that good at storys, and wanna have a good one.
TITLE: Looks ok. How about this for a title: Mario: Legend of the Mushroom Kingdom.

STORY: Also, for a story- Long ago, a legendary treasure was sealed inside the core of a dark place... Now it has been destroyed, so Mario must gather the 4 shards of the treasure and comfront it's former holder and gain it's legendary powers...
The timer might get invisible in bright backgrounds.

Error's story sound kinda cool, maybe you should use it.

Also, in the SMB3 styled level, why do some of the platforms turn into dark green at the bottom, while others don't?

EDIT:
ninja'd
Message of the week: I'm going to be inactive, except for the Third Earth story posts. So I'll be on here once a week.

World's saga is on the fourth chapter.
Game progress is still on chapter one.
Character progress: 11 of 18.
Bug fixing: Initiated.
I say your plot should be this:

Mario is getting quite bored as Peach hasn't been kidnapped lately so he decides he will just leave and wait till Bowser tries to take her. While he's out he gets pretty hungry and knows where a really good deli is but the problem is that he has to get to it so he sets off across the land to get there. Upon arriving he sees it's under new management, low and behold Bowser is the new manager and of course charging Mario 10X more than he'd normally have to pay. Mario then decides to try and get enough coins to buy the shop so he can get a good price on food.

As for the name:

Mario's Midday Stroll to find lunch.
Originally posted by Koopinator113
cool story .


Woo, sounds awesome, gonna use it.

I'm tweaking it a bit so mario has to find it!
Originally posted by UMA
Originally posted by Koopinator113
cool story .


Woo, sounds awesome, gonna use it.

I'm tweaking it a bit so mario has to find it!

Cool x10! BTW how about when confronting the former guardian, you find it out to be someone from a previous mario game, I'll tell u who I have in mind by PM. That way it's secret who's the main villain here, and can suprise the player. How about this as an idea too, the guardian who'll will be be fought in a volcanic tower for the final fight.
Originally posted by Koopinator113
Originally posted by UMA
Originally posted by Koopinator113
cool story .


Woo, sounds awesome, gonna use it.

I'm tweaking it a bit so mario has to find it!

Cool x10! BTW how about when confronting the former guardian, you find it out to be someone from a previous mario game, I'll tell u who I have in mind by PM. That way it's secret who's the main villain here, and can suprise the player. How about this as an idea too, the guardian who'll will be be fought in a volcanic tower for the final fight.

yeah, but Bowser is the secondary villian and mario first has to get Peach's body to take her to the 1-up of life, and after that i already have an cool idea.
The 1up of life. Whoever would've guessed? :O

Looking nice. However, I would suggest changing the status bar font to something that will show up in all BG situations, like having an outline to it (à la SMW itself, for example).

As well, the simplicity of the statusbar is great, yet almost scaring me. How are you going about the items issue: a no-held-item patch, just no items, or something else entirely?
we are all 😎 but some are more 😎 than others
@shark

I've ptched an non-itembox patch.

UPDATES!!
With my spriting skillz, i coded this:


Hah, you fly way too high, you cant get me!


#w{:<} thats not cool!


Comments?, Criticism?
Looks nice.. though.. the bullet bill shooters look a little bright.
Yep, those two bullet bill launchers have a weird color. Try putting the same palette as the others.
Now I need to change my old avatar. Or not.

W.I.P. pic of the main OW (its not gonna be yoshi's house)
C|C?
Double post >.< .



More pics of the OW.

And im working on a Giant Blurp Boss.
Originally posted by UMA
Double post >.< .



More pics of the OW.

And im working on a Giant Blurp Boss.

Good, but the pink dirt under the fortress on the right looks a bit contrasting.


Tah dah, the whole main OW.
(dont ask about the upper island!)
That's a pretty good overworld. I like how you have those bent-pillar thingys in the water, I don't think I've actually seen that done before.

Anyways, the only thing I recommend changing is the waterfall. See how it has animated tiles all the way down? I recommend changing the flat part to just plain water, and then making a border to indicate the next waterfall.

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