Originally posted by ShadowFire
-And with that, it seems all the levels in world one have either been completed or claimed. Hooray!-
-And with that, it seems all the levels in world one have either been completed or claimed. Hooray!-
Hooray indeed.
Well DiddyKaizo100, I would've posted feedback a few days ago but I wasn't home the last two days. Anyways yeah I'll do it now. I feel like your almost there but there's just a few things. (A few might be nitpicks but meh.)
To me these stone blocks kind of clash a bit or look somewhat out of place. (I mentioned this before)
In my opinion this 1up was a bit to easy to get and here's why. If people see 3 chucks, some may try and avoid them by going under here (At least someone with a bit of common sense) Then they'll suddenly stumble across the 1up. I recommend trying to hide it in a better place. (Or else the 1up camping starts to begin)
The koopa coming from the right (For some odd reason) Get's stuck in this pipe. Maybe move him back more.
Still....haven't risen this piranha plant up.
Honestly think this stone block smile at the end looks odd to me (And kind of pointless) I'd honestly just get rid of it.
Well that's pretty much what I could find. Also I'd add just a bit more decoration to it as it still seems kind of empty to me. Also one thing is your level hardly has any coins or coin blocks. Please put some coins and coin blocks as levels should really have these. Anyways that's all. Just fix these ups and your level should be good to go.
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