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The Adventures Of Super Mario - 1xsonic



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I fixed the castle areas. This game is really fun to play with.

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Perhaps you should add more game information to your description, like what the plot is about and such. Anyways, onward to the Removal reasons:


Grammatical errors:

'throughout' is one word.


Hmmm. "Iggy Koopa has been ruining Mario and Yoshi's lives, but he has finally been defeated! *Extra text goes here*". I think this is what you meant.


"I hope you enjoyed it."

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If you're not fast enough here, you have to kill yourself. If the shelless koopa is killed then you're stuck.


Yellow level has a secret exit? Also that ladder has a weird palette.


The Thwomp has a sprite memory error.


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I'd also suggest making the levels longer and add in midpoints. I beat the game in less than 15 minutes.
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Almost there but you must fix these issues. You have fixed most of them, but still have some errors to correct.
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Glitched Midway tile. (Because the midway point is between screen boundries.)


With that new P-Switch you put in to replace the Koopa, you can get stuck if those [?] blocks are hit. Put a cement block there to avoid this.


1) You still haven't changed the yellow level to red.
2) The latter is still off color.
3) The Yellow Switch Palace looks green to me.

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