This is pretty good and quite fun! (I feel a little bit bad for removing this but I'm sure you can fix this quickly)
Just a few things to make it a bit better:
I got the "Time Up!" screen every time Mario died, you should use the Time Up Fix patch.
1. Bullet Bills coming out of nowhere = not very nice. Try using Bullet Bill Shooters and Bullet Machines instead.
2. This 3UP Moon was very easy to get.
This is at least the 7th Yoshi Coin I collected in this level. Shouldn't there be only 5? (since I get a 1UP after each one above 5)
Entrance FG/BG position is too low, try setting it higher.
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So, that's it, good luck!
Just a few things to make it a bit better:
I got the "Time Up!" screen every time Mario died, you should use the Time Up Fix patch.
1. Bullet Bills coming out of nowhere = not very nice. Try using Bullet Bill Shooters and Bullet Machines instead.
2. This 3UP Moon was very easy to get.
This is at least the 7th Yoshi Coin I collected in this level. Shouldn't there be only 5? (since I get a 1UP after each one above 5)
Entrance FG/BG position is too low, try setting it higher.
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So, that's it, good luck!