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La Nueva Aventura de Mario - by LX5

I really hope you actually understand what I'm writing (because of the English). If you don't really know English, I suggest you to ask for help from somebody who knows English.

This hack wouldn't be so bad, but unfortunately, there were a couple of bad errors that should be definitely fixed. Well, let's see:

Palette errors



The colors in this level were really weird: the statusbar, the clouds, the decoration. Also, I recommend to make the Fire Mario a bit darker, the contrast is way too high.





The palettes in this level were pretty eye-killing, unfortunately. Especially the lava and the pipe looks bad. (and the half-invisible enemies)



The midway point needs a bit of a fix here.

Level object errors



Due the incorrect corner tile, I can go into the ground here.



And because of the slopes, the Spiny "glitches" and starts spinning around in one place.



Ooops...did you know, that placing Yoshi coins on Sub-screen boundaries (hit F2 in Lunar Magic to view them) will cause this glitch? Move it one tile higher or lower.

Sprite problems



The Ball 'n' Chain glitches because of the bad sprite memory value. Try another value in the "Lakitu head" icon in LM.



One of the bouncing rocks' and a half of the spinning platform disappeared because of the same reason.



Pretty huge slowdown here. I guess it's because of the many sprites.

Other



These kind of slopes are not the best here, Mario jumps really weird below them.



You're not really faulty here, but there's a small cutoff with the pipe and the wall.



The screen "jumps" left a little bit after coming out of the pipe here. Just put the entrance a bit more leftwards.



A big problem: the OW paths glitch out after these events. You should "uninstall" the title screen ASM moves in the OW editor, that should fix the problem.



Don't make Mario go "into" the wall after getting the Goal Sphere. Make some space for the ending sequence.



It'd be cool if you didn't leave unedited messages in the hack.



- empty message box
- glitched Yoshi tongue



Also, Mario is swimming in a rock -> looks really, really weird.


And a final note: It's highly recommended to submit your hacks in English language. Mainly because more people can understand it that way.
Also, be sure to add description and hack length next time. It's really useful.
Thanks for reading, and good luck.