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Super Hacked World (V1.1) [Demo Release 1] - by videolegoboy123

NAME: Super Hacked World (V1.1) [Demo Release 1]
AUTHOR: videolegoboy123
DESCRIPTION: My first hack I worked hard on. I've gotten one Lets Player so far to do this hack, And all the errors hes told me about (Which was mostly grammar, and spelling) So enjoy and contact me about it.


DENIED!
(I wonder what kind of LPer that guy was.. you should have better got a real beta tester!)



The black surrounding of your name in the Title Screen looks odd. Also the W from WORLD has a weird black stroke.
It otherwise looks kind of cluttered but nothing to worry about.


There are some odd Map16 issues in your Yoshi's House. Fix them.


Now let's see about the cutoffness..


The bushes need to be placed on a complete ledge, not over an edge tile. Also the BG palette could use some touch-up.


This ain't work.



This ain't work either. Use proper (not cutoffness creating) linking tiles or use ExGFX.


The pipe cuts into the ground here. Same as with the above picture.




Hint: Not every English word gets capitalized. I Don't Write Like This Either.
Hello and*
contact*
errors*

Simply get a beta tester who's also fluent in English.


Now let's focus on palettes....

Self-explanatory


I can hardly see that arrow..


lol


"Bowser wasn't that color intended for ... your wall?!"


Finally some more issues:


The note block animation GFX are glitched which is very bad.


Self-explanatory


I messed up. And now?


Also what's the above room for anyway if I don't get anything and I could easily jump through that oddly brownish pipe and save some time?


Obvious level edit? Not on Smwcentral.



To cut it short: YOu have to fix quite a lot. The music was pretty nice but in terms of level design, graphics, overworld design etc. you have to learn quite a bunch. Play some hacks and just keep trying. Also don't forget to get a beta tester!
I play different games on Twitch, I did speedruns of Pokemon Red and Gold, Mario Party 4, but I also do SMW stuff.
I only stream to make progress on my hack currently. Check out my twitch!

Exits done: 50, Overworld: 99%
Play through Taomb Demo 3
Taomb is alive again. Check my Twitch as I work on in it when live.

NAME: Super Hacked World (v1.1)
AUTHOR: videolegoboy123
DESCRIPTION: This s a original videolegoboy123 hack which is called : Super Hacked World

This hack is compatible with BSNES,ZSNESW, and SNES9X

Enjoy!


DENIED!

It's good to see you have the most errors fixed by now, but it still doesn't fully cut it.


First of all you still have major language issues in this hack. Because there are not much messages and I feel I am in a good mood and it's great weather outside which makes me very happy I chose to correct all of them:

"Welcome to Super Hacked World! I hope you enjoy this demo and be sure to check out the readme!

Yoshi's House:
"Hello! Welcome to my hut! Enjoy yourself while you're here!"


Level 101:
"Man... Bowser must be poor, he doesn't even have a classical castle door or something, but he has to pay the employees..."


Level 102:
"There's a secret (not secert) gift in this part of the level. Try and find it!"
edit: Also. This secret was very easy to find. Either give less reward or make it harder.


Make this block act like nothing and you're fine.


These cement blocks still have an ugly palette. The status bar could be fixed as well.


And I still can mess up and be trapped in this room. Best thing would be to make the pipe a reset pipe.


And last but not least but well removal-worthy: This part of the level still is an original SMW level. CTRL + Del it.



Fix up these few things and resubmit.
I play different games on Twitch, I did speedruns of Pokemon Red and Gold, Mario Party 4, but I also do SMW stuff.
I only stream to make progress on my hack currently. Check out my twitch!

Exits done: 50, Overworld: 99%
Play through Taomb Demo 3
Taomb is alive again. Check my Twitch as I work on in it when live.


Reasons for removal:


Water cutoff near the edge, move your water down a tile.

enable sprite buoyancy

Lava Cutoff, move lava 1 tile down

Wall cut-off near pipe.

I'm guess that this tile has the wrong map16 definition to it...

Also the coins in the status bar seem to be a weird color

Pipe cut-offness

Kinda hard to see but the incorrect tile was used by the right side of the pipe for the ground, remove any tiles under the corner tile and you should be good.

Water cut-off, also dont use the buzzy beetles with the incorrect gfx because...

...this is what happens

There seems to be a floating black dot on the corners of the ground. Please fix.

Hmmm....something tells me I needed that P-switch here. Please try to avoid puzzles like this.

Overall is was a pretty good demo, fixing these errors should get it approved
Layout by LDA during C3.

Hack Name: Super Hacked World Demo - 202.9 KB - 12 downloads.
Length: 6 levels
Author: videolegoboy123 - Submitted by: videolegoboy123
Description: Ok Ive fixed almost all the problem please check the Readme because it explains the problem

Works With ZSNES,BSNES, and SNES9X

(Note: I couldn't fix the problem in "Iggy Castle" because the ExGFX mess up the regular GFX in this hack i can't use pipes, or doors to go to the other part of the level. I also couldn't fix the stat bar problem in "Slopes For The Retro" with the different palette on the coins.)

Reasons for removal:

Not sure why this is solid

Still cut off near the back, Just extend the ceiling all the way back.

I Don't think that suppose to happen..

Cut-offness near the back of the pipe

Set the sprite buoyancy option

That one ground corner tile by the pipe is still messed up. Please fix it

Now before state the obvious issue with this pic, take a look at the status bar. The palette issue with the coins literally took me like a minute to fix in Lunar Magic. As for your door issue with Iggy's castle, I'm don't know how you even got these tile sets to work properly, they are literally scattered all over the place and they really shouldn't be. The Pipes and the doors should be compatible with this tile set and somehow you managed to overwrite them. This can be fixed but it would probably take you a bit to get it cleaned up. None the less, the system you have now is working, so I suppose you can keep it that way.

Overall this hack has gotten much better and I'm looking forward to see how this one plays out.

Also as one final note. Use the description section of the hack uploader to actually describe the hack. If you have any notes you want to point out to the moderators, add it at the end of the description in parentheses to we can delete it out easier when it gets accepted.
Layout by LDA during C3.