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I'm working a short hack called Super Wonder World. It's my first hack ever and I may use this thread to ask for help/tips. I'll upload a demo soon if I can make the file size smaller.
Images will come too once I get those uploaded as well.





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the number one rule is NEVER EVER submit your first hack. Ever. Unless its like super duper great. (No cut-off good level design good pallettes etc.)
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Just to inform you of a few things:

1. For your tips/help, ask those in General Hacking Help.

2. Good to here you are gonna get images up, but when making a hack thread you need to have screenshots.

3. "Super _____ World" hacks are very overused title names and I would suggest a name change. Not really necessary, although it would be better to have a more creative name.
Would just calling it "Wonder World" work for a title?

Oh, and here's the first batch of images:

Intro:


The Flooded Yoshi's Island






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That OW is baiscally just alot of cutoff. I can see what you were trying to achieve but its it not the best OW.

If your stuck for OW ideas or how to make them check the tutorials or stick with the orignal, seeing as it did not have great amounts of cutoff.
I've done quite a bit better on the rest of the OW. I'll take a screenshot of the entire overworld so you can see what I mean.





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The OW has tons of cutoff and looks bad in general.
I would start from scratch. Use a new palette and a custom land formation(not square though) to make the OW more unique.
Like I said here's the OW:

Full Overworld:


The Valley of Acid:






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Main OW - This also has a lot of cutoff. Use the 8x8 editor to get tiles that do not cause this cutoff. Also, I can cleary see you used the mountain thing from the original. As advised earlier, the 8x8 editor will give you all the tiles so you can flip the tiles so they do not look cutoff.

Acid Valley - Here, there is also lots of cutoff. It is also quite obvious you used VOB submap. Tjhe bowser's castle, while it is a good idea, is also cutoff. You can use a program called YYCHR to draw new tiles to elimiunate such cutoff, while having a unique hack.

You can also refer to the OW tutorials, and look at some featured hacks for ideas. Some of the enteries in the 2009 OW design contest (particulally 'A Yoshis' entry can also give you an idea of a good OW.

Hope this helps!
:)
I probably should have mentioned this earlier, but I'm using a Mac OS X to do this, so I can't run most of the programs that you guys can. I've tried almost all the different tools, and the only ones that work for me are Lunar Magic and Lunar IPS. And about the cutoffs, I would love to make those look right, but I flipped the pieces every way possible and couldn't find a matching one. And yes, I did use the mountain thing because I thought it fit in with the whole flooding thing, and that it would have still been above water.

One last thing: Not to be rude but, THIS IS MY FIRST HACK, so it's not going to be near as amazing as any of the stuff I've seen on here or any other hacks. It's trial and error. When I make my next hack, It'll probably be 10 times better then this one.





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Its cool that this is your first hack, just dont submit it. also, please read the hack submission guidelines for tips and help.
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I still want people to play the levels, I worked really hard on those to make them difficult but fun. If you really don't want me to submit the hack, I could still send the IPS file, because that screen of the Yoshi's Island OW is from the demo, not the full. The full has about 15 Levels.

P.S Congrats on 666 posts :)





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lol I didnt even notice >.< thanks! I'll play the levels for you. Make sure you send me an IPS patch and NOT</b></i>
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As others have stated with the OW, it has alot of cutoff. Try to do what the orignal did by adding cliffs and the bottoms of cliffs to ladn formantions so cutoff will not be there. Its not when you get used to it.
Don't worry, I'll send an IPS patch. Um... Where to send to? And how?





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I'd put the patch in the file bin and post the link here, but there are many ways to do it.
<blm> zsnes users are the flatearthers of emulation
1. make the ips patch.
2. Click on "My Files" in the side bar
3. upload your ips patch.
4. Click on "My Files" again
5. right click the link. Hit copy link or whatever.
6. Come back ot this thread and click my name, then go down to the bottom and hit send message.
7. Click the blue underlined A at the top.
8. Paste your link into the box that appears.
9. type out what you want the link (clickable words) to say.
10. Hit the blue A again.
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Sorry if this sounds stupid, but I'm kinda new so... Where's the file bin?





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It should be in the menu, above Edit Profile. It's called My Files, so it's not surprising if you didn't find it.
Here's the direct link if you still can't find it.
<blm> zsnes users are the flatearthers of emulation
Thanks, I sent it now. You can take screenshots an put them on here if you want to. I give permissions. lol





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