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SMB: The New Adventures

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This is screenshots of my first hack:



















Not bad for a first hack, though I always thought the best thing to do is vanilla levels but eh.

However: Screenshot 1 is odd with Mario in the ground like that, and some of the screenshots have the status bar with a bad palette.
Seems like a well-made hack for now, but it looks like English isn't your main language. You should ask some english people to proofread your setences (as I do sometimes since I'm not english).

The only problems I see are :

1. The status bar is discolored in some screenshots

2. Why is Mario starting below the ground ? Wouldn't it be better if he started above and not visible ?

3. Overworld has too much different tiles (I mean, why four different hills instead of two ?), otherwise it's more a level design problem

4. The status bar lacks item box borders

5. The coins don't seem to animate and the Yoshi Eggs in the last screenshot look strange.

6. Last one, you shouldn't place big sprites next to coins with layer priority enabled.



Otherwise it's great. Keep it up, I'ld like to see more.
Yoshi Egg,s ripped from YI. Sorry for bad Palette#w :(#w{:<}


Should be: Hi Mario! Go to Peach's castle for dinner. It's at 2pm.



Should be: Peach's Castle



Should be: Master Mario! Bowser has taken the Princess! Please rescue her!

Well those are some fixed typos. Send me the hack if you want me to proof read and correct your English...
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Dosen't looks bad, looks good apart from the overwritten status bar pallete that looks horrible.
Looks nice, but some of the letters in the title screen are hard to see.
I'm a begginer. Patches added to rom:
SMB3 P-meter;
No more sprite tile limits;
Dynamic sprite patch;
Screen scrolling pipes.
Not bad for begginer!

The title screen letters are hard to see...

But the hack is good!






You must fix the title screen letters (only the little ones) and some status bar palettes, but, apart from that, I liked the SMB3 style of your hack.
Now I need to change my old avatar. Or not.
Woah, you're only eleven and this is your first hack?
Looks really good. The status bar palettes need fixing, though.

Also, Mario's house looks awkward with the tube coming out of it.

Also, the letters on the title screen saying "The New Adventures" have an ugly palette.

Also, I really like your overworld, but the 2 bridges next to eachother looks a bit odd.

Also, the tree palette in the level with Kuribo's shoe is too bright and saturated.

Good luck with this!
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W1 Castle is finished!




And SMB1 Bowser:
It looks nice and decent. I don't see anything bad with the FG and BG palette. Though you may want to fix some tiles and palettes of your status bar.
Please send to me your Animated OW graphics.
This is pretty good for a first hack, the level design seems pretty good and you know how to insert custom stuff which is a +. There were some bad palettes in the very 1st screens you showed but they're not hard to fix. Nice job so far!
Very well done for a first hack. The level design is a bit flat and bland(add more decoration), but you seem to be a pretty creative guy.
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Originally posted by Luigi370
Please send to me your Animated OW graphics.

I'm sure you are looking for this.
Animgfx.bin is default. Please send this file using for your hacks.
How to expand edited ROM to 6MB?

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