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The 7 Stars of the Land!!

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Now that I'm hacking again, I might as well make a thread for it.

I don't have any new screens, but I'll post the ones that haven't changed:

I know, I trying to get them to show up....
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Story: The Land of *insert name here* has been attacked by *insert name here*. *He* stole all 7 stars! the stars held peace in the land and since they were taken, *his* minons have started taking over *land*.
Mario must help return all 7 stars back to the star palace to recover peace to *land*.
I haven't really worked on the storyline much, but now mario saves a star from the castles.

EDIT:The mystic eggs, containing the dino gods, were taken and mario must recover them in order to save an odd new land, recently discovered to host a highly intellegent species of yoshi, which may be the key to the mushroom kingdoms newly developed famine.
Thanks to Blynd.


I'll have a credits list here, so when I do insert credits, I don't forget anyone.

Icegoom (GFX)
Blynd (Story/Plot)
Heh. Sure looks better than mine, but BOWSER'S Castle seems out of the map, plus, the Twhomps look kind of stupid.

But how dare I tell bad.

The graphisms are interesting, the map looks awesome.


Better than mine, as what I said before.


The purpleish Pinkish submap burns my eyes.
looks decent otherwise.
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Looks pretty good, I like the overworld. I hope you make progress on this.
Click here to enter the world of mediocre!
Purple Pallete = No

Redrawn GFX = Yes

Looks good....

I dont get why someone doesnt like those thwomps though...

Click and fix the little red circles
OK, I'll fix everything (except the thwomps, they're redrawn's gfx). @ funkymunk: Why are the stars in star world circled?

The Purple OW looks bad, because of its pallete and it has too many decorations. Delete some of them.

The rest looks good.

Beaten... ¬¬

@Dotsarecool

The white circle around them looks ugly.
I don't see anything wrong with that. ._.
Originally posted by Funkymunk
The white circle around them look ugly.


That's the already revealed path that they're on.

The pink submap is not good, the OW has too many edges that are just lines, but aside from that, looks good!

Your layout has been removed.
Ok, tell me what you think about the "special world"

that story sounds like the one from "super mario rpg: ledgend of the seven stars"....

other than that nice job.
If anyone wants to help me with making mario and luigi:superstar saga sprites/gfx PM me
I wouldn't know because I haven't heard of that game. :P
Fix those errors on the main overworld... Their annoying me. :S
This is looking pretty cool so far - nice overworld (could be a little less straight lines, but hey, whatever). Very nice level design, too. Can't wait to check this out. Good luck!

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If I moderated your hack, there was apparently a 90 percent chance it was rejected.
Originally posted by Funkymunk
Fix those errors on the main overworld... Their annoying me. :S


What errors? I thought I fixed them all..
Diagonal peices touching water in the main part of the overworld.
I like everything but the plot. It's rather unoriginal really. It's in so many hacks, Paper Mario, and as mentioned above, Super Mario Rpg. (If you haven't played it still, pm me. I'll tell you about it.
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K, then I need someone to help me create a plot then. As you can see I suck at it......
How do I get past the third level? The Mole-Guy cant go through the blocks...
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