Leviaga is a bit of a sharp one, I'll admit: he remembers the old mafia chat I used to use. He was once one of my teammates, so he would know about it. But there were lots of flaws with the system. First, it was open. Anyone who snooped through the lists could have found them. Second, anyone's names could be used at any point! ANYONE could sneak into our conversations!
Why would I continue to use such a lousy method? More recently, I've been IM'ing my fellow Bloods. We PM'd our e-mail addresses to each other. It's far more efficient, and secretive too!
Leviaga must have found Pieguy suspicious for his lack of ideas, and Ramon for his inactivity. Thus, he forged 2 sigchats to cast suspicion on them. A cheap trick, to be sure. But there's one major flaw in them: one of them only has 16 posts in it! How the Hell could he have found it if it was real?!
You did a good job, replicating the facts, adding a bit of realism. You must write stories in your spare time. Good job, but not quite good enough.
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. And I got depressed, because I thought, Damn. I am less nurturing than a desert. -Demetri Martin.
Why would I continue to use such a lousy method? More recently, I've been IM'ing my fellow Bloods. We PM'd our e-mail addresses to each other. It's far more efficient, and secretive too!
Leviaga must have found Pieguy suspicious for his lack of ideas, and Ramon for his inactivity. Thus, he forged 2 sigchats to cast suspicion on them. A cheap trick, to be sure. But there's one major flaw in them: one of them only has 16 posts in it! How the Hell could he have found it if it was real?!
You did a good job, replicating the facts, adding a bit of realism. You must write stories in your spare time. Good job, but not quite good enough.
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. And I got depressed, because I thought, Damn. I am less nurturing than a desert. -Demetri Martin.