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Touhou Yumejikuu ~ Phantasmagoria of Dim. Dream - Eastern Blue Sky by monkey03297

File Name: Touhou Yumejikuu ~ Phantasmagoria of Dim. Dream - Eastern Blue Sky
Submitted: by monkey03297
Authors: monkey03297
Insert Size: 0x00ED bytes
Type: Song
Sample Usage: None
Source: Port
Duration: 0:32
Featured: No
Description: 東方の青い空
One of ending theme from Touhou Kaikidan.
Used 4 channels, #4, 5, 6, 7 is not used.
SPC

This is a fairly simple port, and as such, I'm being a bit more strict on it. It's off to a good start, but I think you can do more with the instrumentation.

Given the simplicity of the song, I think you could combine some instruments to make everything sound fuller. One suggestion I have is to make #3 @6 instead of @0. This will sound closer to the original.

Another suggestion I have would be to copy #1 and #2 onto #4 and #5, and make each set of channels (#1 and #2, #4 and #5) a different instrument. One example combination that might sound good is @1 and @2, but feel free to experiment and see what sounds good to you. Make sure to change echo/volumes accordingly.

The original also has a fake echo that plays the lead slightly differently, but honestly, I don't think you'd necessarily need it. Up to you if you want to add it.

Also, there is a wrong note on #2. f1^1<a>cd1^1fga1^1de should be f1^1<a+>cd1^1fga1^1de

That should be it. I look forward to the re-submission!