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Mario's Super World Is an open worldish 2d smw rom hack, and I was wondering if anybody else liked the idea. (Note: There is no storyline because I can't make stories =P)

I do need help with block asm (I'm really bad at making custom blocks)

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I don't really have much to say about it, except for some criticisms on a few screens.
The first one shows Mario and a slanted pipe on semi-solid ground. If Mario were to jump from beneath it and go into the pipe, he would then glitch into it.
The s in "Mario's" looks awfully sloppy, and that's probably because you didn't make any new graphics for it and reused the ones in "super". I think that's fine, but you should try to at least add a comma and add the missing shadow drop graphics.
The last one shows the overworld, which is awfully bland and square, and has some perspective errors on the corners.

Anyways, what parts do you need help with block ASM? You can use Blockreator to make some simple blocks without needing to know much about programming and use GPS to insert them.
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Good luck making an open world game. OW events start getting kinda crazy to work with once your paths get complicated. #smrpg{y}

Criticisms:
Mainly the red 's' in the title being small and out of place, and the overworld being blocky, bland and green, and in need of some perspective fixes.
Besides that your level seems a bit empty... But I guess it's hard to tell because your screenshots leave quite a lot to be desired.
                                                                                                                  
                              

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Originally posted by Cheeyev
Anyways, what parts do you need help with block ASM?

I tried to make a block that becomes 10 used blocks when Mario hits it, but it doesn't work?
It only turns into a used block???

Originally posted by Cheeyev
The last one shows the overworld, which is awfully bland and square, and has some perspective errors on the corners.

Originally posted by 19 Brownies
Criticisms: Mainly the red 's' in the title being small and out of place, and the overworld being blocky, bland and green, and in need of some perspective fixes.

Yeah I think I fixed that slightly.
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Originally posted by oderjunks
I tried to make a block that becomes 10 used blocks when Mario hits it, but it doesn't work?
It only turns into a used block???

What do you exactly mean by that? A block that becomes a used block and creates 9 more used blocks? Was this perhaps gonna be a snake or what?
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Originally posted by #3 in category 32!
What do you exactly mean by that?


Originally posted by #3 in category 32!
A block that becomes a used block and creates 9 more used blocks?

yes
Originally posted by #3 in category 32!
Was this perhaps gonna be a snake or what?

no
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What you've shown so far is really bland, but not obviously broken or visually wrong, so you're on the right track there. #tb{:)}

Originally posted by oderjunks
I tried to make a block that becomes 10 used blocks when Mario hits it, but it doesn't work?

Unfortunately, just saying "it doesn't work" doesn't help the people wanting to help you. You might want to ask in the Help forum and go into detail about what you tried (including code), what you expected to happen, and what happened instead.


 

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Originally posted by WhiteYoshiEgg

Unfortunately, just saying "it doesn't work" doesn't help the people wanting to help you. You might want to ask in the Help forum and go into detail about what you tried (including code), what you expected to happen, and what happened instead.


Ohh got it!

Originally posted by WhiteYoshiEgg
What you've shown so far is really bland, but not obviously broken or visually wrong, so you're on the right track there.

Actually one of the events (the one that reveals the far right level) bugged out and updated the Yoshi's island map even though I was on the overworld, but I just fixed that.

Also I think I fixed the "bland" part...


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The overworld is definitely better now that it is surrounded by water. But it is still blocky and without detail and texture. It also has a few perspective errors.
                                                                                                                  
                              

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Originally posted by LethalBrownies
The overworld is definitely better now that it is surrounded by water. But it is still blocky and without detail and texture.

I think fixed that again.



Originally posted by LethalBrownies
It also has a few perspective errors.

Okay this is starting to get confusing, what perspective errors?

EDIT: I just noticed that part of the island is broken, I'll fix that now
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I'd like to hear the hackings I've never seen in my life. Is this a fun place?

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Originally posted by oderjunks
Okay this is starting to get confusing, what perspective errors?

It's when the bottom part of the cliff doesn't match up with the top part. Usually, you want the two to always be parallel (in other words, the same shape). It's an issue in your last screenshot you showed, but not in the one before that.


 
I think what oderjunks is making are pieces of land that jut out over the ocean (like this).

It's a neat idea, but the actual cliffside is so bland, and could use some more details. If you look at the original overworld, you can see that they add some uneven lines so that the cliffs aren't so bald. They also hardly ever make one flat face that goes on and on, so you could probably make some parts of the cliff go in and out instead of one flat direction.


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Originally posted by WhiteYoshiEgg

It's when the bottom part of the cliff doesn't match up with the top part.

OMG I'M SUCH AN IDIOT I DIDN'T NOTICE THAT UNTILL NOW #tb{DX<}
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Progress downdate:
Everything in the lm overworld editor got erased
the SMB3 goal card refuses to cooperate with the overworld

Progress update:
Been working on new [WIP] SMB3 screen scrolling pipes (Download)
Getting some ideas of more levels
Saving all textbox text
Learning how to use PIXI and GPS and Blockreator
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Update:
its discontinued...
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