Although this hack has a really nice overworld, it's pretty mediocre to be honest. It seems like the levels were rushed, especially the second one, which has no midway point and dives straight into the goal around where a midway point should be in a level with a reasonable length. Speaking of goal points, what's up with their palettes? They look really unpleasing with those weird, clashing colors. Also, there are some glitched graphics in the hack, like the sleepy goombas in the red switch palace and in the final boss battle. The sleepy goombas also seem to float when you kill them with a shell; to fix this, go download the newest version of them
here. Now with that aside, I'd also to mention that there are some pretty poor level design choices, like the cave section in the second level, which is way too claustrophobic and is overly repetitive with the spikes, and the airship level, which actually has sections where you can get stuck, and that's a big no no.
Now, I really hope you can improve your hack and make it something worth playing. Good luck!
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