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Snivy's First Mario World by PKMNTrainerNSS

File Name: Snivy's First Mario World
Submitted: 20-02-2016 11:03:19 PM by PKMNTrainerNSS
Authors: PKMNTrainerNSS
Demo: Yes
Featured: No
Length: 3 exit(s)
Difficulty: Normal
Description: This is an incredibly short hack showing my OW editing, level editing and palette editing. It's sat on my PC since late 2014 and I don't plan on finishing it.
A demo for my first major hack will be revealed later on.
The main reason of rejection here is what you wrote in the hack description: your hack is incredibly short, there isn't enough time of gameplay per single run.
Not to mention, "YOSHI'S ISLAND 2" isn't even complete, since it's a level without sprites. "YOSHI'S ISLAND 1" is an okay-ish level, a pretty easy one, totally fitting a world 1 level; the switch palace level is extremly simple, but it works, I guess.

A few errors I noticed, which you should take into consideration:
- I can access the switch palace even without clearing the first level. Minor, but I assume you didn't mean it to be accessible since the beginning...?
- Never use the last row of Lunar Magic. This looked like a fall in-game, but it's actually ground to stand on.
- Bad actlike of the slope there, I can enter inside the ground.

My suggestion for your next update is (mainly) to make your hack twice bigger (something like 6-7 exits totally works for me). Reading your .txt, I felt like you just wanted to show your hack to the community. You can do that by making a wip thread here. This way, people can give you feedback and constructive criticism about your level's aesthetics and design. I also highly encourage you to pick some testers here, they can give you in-depht feedback about your hack. Feel free to use your filebin for .ips files and pics for your future wip thread also.

That's it so far. Good luck with your next update!