This song isn't good.
Something just feels very wrong about it. I don't know if it's the sporadic bassline, or the leitmotif that's been beaten to death, maybe it's because of how unbalanced the instruments are.
Like others said, it's very noisy. There's no vocal point in the song. It just doesn't feel as polished as the other song.
Also, don't worry about space if it goes at the expense of the song.
Something just feels very wrong about it. I don't know if it's the sporadic bassline, or the leitmotif that's been beaten to death, maybe it's because of how unbalanced the instruments are.
Like others said, it's very noisy. There's no vocal point in the song. It just doesn't feel as polished as the other song.
Also, don't worry about space if it goes at the expense of the song.