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Review:
Not a bad hack. I actually respect the effort you put in the hack. Overall the hack seemed fun to play due to it having a different protagonist and a different story. Though the levels weren't really impressing as they seemed to be regularly designed, but nothing really boring to play, overall it was a nice regular hack.
Some things that annoyed me in the hack, mostly the language. Since I'm a native portuguese speaker like you I found a lot of gramatical errors and some nonexistent words in message boxes of your hack so I'll suggest you to next time ask someone to proofread all the texts of your hack. The second yoshi coin in "Cavernas Escuras" is glitchy, so I'd say you to move it somewhere the coin can't glitch. Those are the things I'd like you fix on the next version of your hack.
Verdict:
Since I have no actual reasons to remove the hack, I'll accept the hack eventually. The userbase is free to express thoughts.
Review:
Not a bad hack. I actually respect the effort you put in the hack. Overall the hack seemed fun to play due to it having a different protagonist and a different story. Though the levels weren't really impressing as they seemed to be regularly designed, but nothing really boring to play, overall it was a nice regular hack.
Some things that annoyed me in the hack, mostly the language. Since I'm a native portuguese speaker like you I found a lot of gramatical errors and some nonexistent words in message boxes of your hack so I'll suggest you to next time ask someone to proofread all the texts of your hack. The second yoshi coin in "Cavernas Escuras" is glitchy, so I'd say you to move it somewhere the coin can't glitch. Those are the things I'd like you fix on the next version of your hack.
Verdict:
Since I have no actual reasons to remove the hack, I'll accept the hack eventually. The userbase is free to express thoughts.