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Choco COLLAB - MaSeHiHa 2 -- Contest Version available for download!

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Welcome to my new Hack project, which is... well a submission to the "12 days before christmas" Contest, that is currently going on here on SMWCentral.net! Although I don´t think I´ll be able to complete all of the 12 levels before the deadline in a few days (as well as I´ve got a big problem with the custom music at the moment), I´d still like to complete and release this Hack. Here is where I´ll post updates from time to time, so stay tuned!

obligatory storyline: Still not having found his hat Mario is travelling around and finally arrives at a strange looking island, where he keeps on searching.

Screenshots:



Contest Version download:

http://bin.smwcentral.net/u/20871/12LevelContestNeidave.ips

feedback is highly appreciated!
C3 stuff: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=viewthread&t=67626 HDMA-Codes and Custom Music included!

1 Island Of Vanilla Feeling: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=5988

MaSeHiHa World 1: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6055

DINGS Demo: https://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=12147

this looks amazing so far, Neidave! i really like the hdma you inserted into the hack and i really like your palettes; overworld and in-level.

last screenshot looks bland (guessing this is your current preview level) and mario's hair blends with the background. other than that, can't wait to see more! #smw{:peace:}
My Inspiring Quotes on Personal Growth and Change:

"Resolved financial/personal problems equal greater growth!"

"The only constant thing in life is change; nothing is set in stone. The old is replaced with the new. Forgive yourself for past mistakes. When many different problems in your life are resolved (personal, financial, etc.), newfound strength and confidence is gained in the process. Usually, failures, lack of assertiveness, disappointments, incompetence, low self-esteem and lack of self-respect, financial struggles, and setbacks can cause us to change and take action to solve any problem, leading to increased strength and confidence. This you learn from experience.

I have been experiencing this aforementioned newfound strength and confidence myself for the past FOUR to EIGHT years or so, getting stronger with each passing year, learning with each mistake I make and becoming more joyful in the process. Because of this newfound confidence I've acquired over the years, finding my passion is of utmost importance in 2022! You can develop this strength and confidence in yourself as well!"


To whoever's reading this, you are amazing and you are capable of doing equally amazing things. Gather confidence and be yourself! Say goodbye to the old you and welcome the new you! It wants to arise every moment, but you don't let it. Learn from your mistakes and never make that mistake again! Find your passion and live it!"

Finding my passion in life, but I may still be active on SMWCentral from time to time. Still enjoy playing many hacks, but I'm widening my perspective on life and opening myself to the new.
Originally posted by mario and luigi
this looks amazing so far, Neidave! i really like the hdma you inserted into the hack and i really like your palettes; overworld and in-level.

last screenshot looks bland (guessing this is your current preview level) and mario's hair blends with the background. other than that, can't wait to see more! #smw{:peace:}


Thank you very much! Yeah the last Screenshot actually shows the levels setup only - without any Leveldesign yet. And about the hair... When Mario moves, it shouldn't be too much of a real problem! #w{=D}
C3 stuff: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=viewthread&t=67626 HDMA-Codes and Custom Music included!

1 Island Of Vanilla Feeling: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=5988

MaSeHiHa World 1: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6055

DINGS Demo: https://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=12147

Although I have commented on these screenshots before in the actual thread, they still seem quite good. All of them seems like an average level which is fine in itself but I would like to see some twists along the way. There is absolutely no way of giving my full impression on this hack until I have played it so good luck designing the rest of the hack #ab{:)}.
Originally posted by Everest
Although I have commented on these screenshots before in the actual thread, they still seem quite good. All of them seems like an average level which is fine in itself but I would like to see some twists along the way. There is absolutely no way of giving my full impression on this hack until I have played it so good luck designing the rest of the hack #ab{:)}.


Thank you! Well an important aspect regarding the atmosphere is the use of custom music, which makes my Rom crash at the moment no matter which tool is used, but I could still give out a demo, as the leveldesign obviously is the most important part of any Hack...
C3 stuff: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=viewthread&t=67626 HDMA-Codes and Custom Music included!

1 Island Of Vanilla Feeling: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=5988

MaSeHiHa World 1: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6055

DINGS Demo: https://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=12147



MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

NO I WON'T

YES I WILL

MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA

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Please. No lava -> water recolouring. Anyways, hack looks nice so far :3 Keep it up ^^
Originally posted by mrdeppelman


MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

NO I WON'T

YES I WILL

MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA


Thank you! #ab{:D} #ab{:D}

Well I´ve got a little update on my space level to show:



I hope you like it, because deppel really took a lot of his time just to let me post this! #w{=P}
C3 stuff: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=viewthread&t=67626 HDMA-Codes and Custom Music included!

1 Island Of Vanilla Feeling: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=5988

MaSeHiHa World 1: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6055

DINGS Demo: https://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=12147

"different dimension":



If that´s even okay for the Contest... #w{=P}
C3 stuff: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=viewthread&t=67626 HDMA-Codes and Custom Music included!

1 Island Of Vanilla Feeling: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=5988

MaSeHiHa World 1: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6055

DINGS Demo: https://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=12147

with hdma inserted into this level, it really does give it a 'different dimension' feeling! however, i think the green could be just a little darker.

also, i just noticed that the title screen looks bland/unedited. you should try editing it as well.

everything else looks nice though; i can't wait for this to finish! #smw{^_^;}
My Inspiring Quotes on Personal Growth and Change:

"Resolved financial/personal problems equal greater growth!"

"The only constant thing in life is change; nothing is set in stone. The old is replaced with the new. Forgive yourself for past mistakes. When many different problems in your life are resolved (personal, financial, etc.), newfound strength and confidence is gained in the process. Usually, failures, lack of assertiveness, disappointments, incompetence, low self-esteem and lack of self-respect, financial struggles, and setbacks can cause us to change and take action to solve any problem, leading to increased strength and confidence. This you learn from experience.

I have been experiencing this aforementioned newfound strength and confidence myself for the past FOUR to EIGHT years or so, getting stronger with each passing year, learning with each mistake I make and becoming more joyful in the process. Because of this newfound confidence I've acquired over the years, finding my passion is of utmost importance in 2022! You can develop this strength and confidence in yourself as well!"


To whoever's reading this, you are amazing and you are capable of doing equally amazing things. Gather confidence and be yourself! Say goodbye to the old you and welcome the new you! It wants to arise every moment, but you don't let it. Learn from your mistakes and never make that mistake again! Find your passion and live it!"

Finding my passion in life, but I may still be active on SMWCentral from time to time. Still enjoy playing many hacks, but I'm widening my perspective on life and opening myself to the new.
Originally posted by mario and luigi
with hdma inserted into this level, it really does give it a 'different dimension' feeling! however, i think the green could be just a little darker.

also, i just noticed that the title screen looks bland/unedited. you should try editing it as well.

everything else looks nice though; i can't wait for this to finish! #smw{^_^;}


The Title Screen is something I always plan to change of course! I just decided to post it here as well because of the already inserted game-title there.

I´m quite glad you like it! #w{=D}
C3 stuff: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=viewthread&t=67626 HDMA-Codes and Custom Music included!

1 Island Of Vanilla Feeling: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=5988

MaSeHiHa World 1: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6055

DINGS Demo: https://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=12147




Originally posted by Neidave




Everything what a good level needs! (floating water and a strange enemy)
Originally posted by Neidave



I hope you use the Trololol you made :P
Keep up the work and don't quit it!







Originally posted by Neidave
"different dimension":

*Image*

Interesting idea with the palettes and types of elements (including sprite replacements) however you must be very careful when making these types of levels as it is easy to go off-track and mess everything up. Keeping the player's interest is also important in these types of levels.
Originally posted by Superkingyoshi

I hope you use the Trololol you made :P


Of course I will implement that music! #w{=P}


Originally posted by Superkingyoshi

Everything what a good level needs! (floating water and a strange enemy)


Truly two of the most important aspects to take care of while designing a Hack... #w{=D}


Originally posted by Everest
Originally posted by Neidave
"different dimension":

*Image*

Interesting idea with the palettes and types of elements (including sprite replacements) however you must be very careful when making these types of levels as it is easy to go off-track and mess everything up. Keeping the player's interest is also important in these types of levels.


I had problems with that level-theme as well and would probably have never made a level outside this contest, but I´ll do my best! #w{=)}
C3 stuff: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=viewthread&t=67626 HDMA-Codes and Custom Music included!

1 Island Of Vanilla Feeling: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=5988

MaSeHiHa World 1: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6055

DINGS Demo: https://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=12147

Not to bash you or anything, but I really do not like the outline of that pipe. Where are you getting those graphics from? Are there any actual 32x32 tiles you can use, or at least smoothen out??? Because that is really REALLY throwing off a lot of the look of the level.

Also, you might want to consider giving black outlines to the sprites, because they look out of place with the foreground and stuff. Just my two cents. (But something seriously needs to be done about the pipe)
Originally posted by S.C.O.R.P.I.O.N.
Not to bash you or anything, but I really do not like the outline of that pipe. Where are you getting those graphics from? Are there any actual 32x32 tiles you can use, or at least smoothen out??? Because that is really REALLY throwing off a lot of the look of the level.

Also, you might want to consider giving black outlines to the sprites, because they look out of place with the foreground and stuff. Just my two cents. (But something seriously needs to be done about the pipe)


Thank you for the hints!

Update:


C3 stuff: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=viewthread&t=67626 HDMA-Codes and Custom Music included!

1 Island Of Vanilla Feeling: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=5988

MaSeHiHa World 1: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6055

DINGS Demo: https://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=12147

wow, smb3 foreground and background always looks pleasant! not too much to say since it's only one screenshot, but keep going! i'm liking your hack so far! #smw{^_^}
My Inspiring Quotes on Personal Growth and Change:

"Resolved financial/personal problems equal greater growth!"

"The only constant thing in life is change; nothing is set in stone. The old is replaced with the new. Forgive yourself for past mistakes. When many different problems in your life are resolved (personal, financial, etc.), newfound strength and confidence is gained in the process. Usually, failures, lack of assertiveness, disappointments, incompetence, low self-esteem and lack of self-respect, financial struggles, and setbacks can cause us to change and take action to solve any problem, leading to increased strength and confidence. This you learn from experience.

I have been experiencing this aforementioned newfound strength and confidence myself for the past FOUR to EIGHT years or so, getting stronger with each passing year, learning with each mistake I make and becoming more joyful in the process. Because of this newfound confidence I've acquired over the years, finding my passion is of utmost importance in 2022! You can develop this strength and confidence in yourself as well!"


To whoever's reading this, you are amazing and you are capable of doing equally amazing things. Gather confidence and be yourself! Say goodbye to the old you and welcome the new you! It wants to arise every moment, but you don't let it. Learn from your mistakes and never make that mistake again! Find your passion and live it!"

Finding my passion in life, but I may still be active on SMWCentral from time to time. Still enjoy playing many hacks, but I'm widening my perspective on life and opening myself to the new.
Hmm,very cool graphic design.Can't wait.


Also,Happy New Year!
Originally posted by Lithuanian Dude
Hmm,very cool graphic design.Can't wait.


Also,Happy New Year!


Glad you like it! And no - I´ve still got an hour left before 2014... #w{=P}
C3 stuff: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=viewthread&t=67626 HDMA-Codes and Custom Music included!

1 Island Of Vanilla Feeling: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=5988

MaSeHiHa World 1: http://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=6055

DINGS Demo: https://www.smwcentral.net/?p=section&a=details&id=12147


Your hack looks very nice, but you really should improve youe hack a bit after the deadline, even if it's already finished. Look for some details after submission. You also should fix the ugly springboard in the 5th screenshot, if you don't already have. Look at these mega-pixels! :O
Your level design looks very good too. Keep on like this, and I'll have no chance ^^
EDIT: Happy New Year, of course!
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