[hack zip]
The main problems with this hack are that the levels are unorganized, they are too long or too short, and the level design isn't that interesting either. Since this is suppsed to be (I think) a "1-world" (or "half-world) hack, the levels should have similar lengths and also probably similar style.
There are other smaller-bigger problems as well:
It looks really weird on the title screen that Mario's just jumping around in a cement "cage". You should make at least a basic sample level.
The intro level starts with also this scene, not to mention that the Entrance FG/BG index is too low.
The OW hasn't got any paths, normal layer 2 events and it could be more decorated.
The orange background looks pretty weird here.
The layer 2 event is a bit messed up here.
The orange background is quite ugly and the ground's color is not the best, either.
The lava's different parts have different colors = cutoff.
Ughh...the lava looks really bad here. You used the corner tiles instead of the horizontal lava tiles.
You should totally do these before submitting another hack:
- Read the Hack Submission Guidelines
- Watch this video
- Read other hack submission logs
- Read AxemJinx's level design guide
The main problems with this hack are that the levels are unorganized, they are too long or too short, and the level design isn't that interesting either. Since this is suppsed to be (I think) a "1-world" (or "half-world) hack, the levels should have similar lengths and also probably similar style.
There are other smaller-bigger problems as well:
It looks really weird on the title screen that Mario's just jumping around in a cement "cage". You should make at least a basic sample level.
The intro level starts with also this scene, not to mention that the Entrance FG/BG index is too low.
The OW hasn't got any paths, normal layer 2 events and it could be more decorated.
The orange background looks pretty weird here.
The layer 2 event is a bit messed up here.
The orange background is quite ugly and the ground's color is not the best, either.
The lava's different parts have different colors = cutoff.
Ughh...the lava looks really bad here. You used the corner tiles instead of the horizontal lava tiles.
You should totally do these before submitting another hack:
- Read the Hack Submission Guidelines
- Watch this video
- Read other hack submission logs
- Read AxemJinx's level design guide