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Yoshi's adventure

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Yoshi wents on a adventure.


Intro screen.

Overworld.
Mario and Luigi's house


Black Yoshi's underground.


Restores HP and MP for 48 coins.

Muncher having a lunch.By the way,Goombas will chase Yoshi and attack.

Walljumpin'.

The sensitive bridge.

Midway point,various styles.

Left pipe,bonus game.

Fixed Yoshi hammer GFX.


Racin' with a koopa.

Yoshi ate too much berries.He should go on a diet.

OW.

Air meter+special coin+SMB3 fish.

Air meter in action.

NO AIR AAAAAAGH

TEH HACK CARTRIDGE...
Leave criticism,suggestions,and everything else...
GvS @smwcentral.net ~ u:11380
Eh, not too bad, actually. It all looks empty in terms of sprite placement. The levels could also really use some decorations and perhaps custom palettes to get some better atmospheres. The level design doesn't seem so bad: it's pretty nice, although yet a bit bland. The title screen is pretty original and stuff, but shouldn't you really display the name of the hack? Seems a little more logical to me. You should also decorate your overworld a bit more: it looks really empty now.
And finally, perhaps you could fix a few things like:
- The palette of the "A" coin and the "48" in the message box in the first few screens.
- Perhaps some better graphics for the walljump blocks
- That new "Midway point" of yours, yeah, doesn't really look that great, sorry.
- The pipe has cutoff in the bonus room.

That's about it. Keep up the good work, and good luck with your hack!

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