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Peach Melba (CHANGING TO TEAM HACK)

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WARNING: THIS IS A SNEAK PEAK






*Proposed Plot*

Mario, Luigi and Peach are on route to the Mushroom Kingdom after Yoshi's birthday bash, when SUDDENLY!!!




PEACH IS PUSHED OUT THE PLANE AND THE BROTHERS ARE CAPTURED AAAAAH!!!. Ahem. Luckily, Peach's dress is like a parachute so she lands safely, safely to her own castle where there have been weird 'going-ons' around the main castle path. Will Peach ever get to the bottom of the mystery? Will Mario and Luigi be safe? Is this actually worth my time? Stay tuned...



Enough of that, I present to you 'Peach Melba' (again |-O), a hack that follows the adventure of Peach as she encouters dangers in all sorts of shapes, sizes and difficulties; solves puzzling mysteries between the worlds; and hopes to achieve the ultimate goal of saving the brothers and the day.


These are the various worlds that I have planned:


W1 - Pincitti Gardens
W2 - Gafron Cave
W3 - Nosticat Forest
W4 - Huportvei Waters
W5 - Intertwinal Resko
W6 - Planet Baethric
W7 - Psi's Clouds
W8 - Yomboru Ice Cream
W9 - Wakova Desert
W10 - Final Luski Pin



Peach's Castle 1st Room 1st Part:




And the World 1 Starter:




See, some mysteries already (like that ON/OFF switch). So...
Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

The Shrine Policy - Always think you're better than me
The storyline seems OK, but Its would'nt be correct to say anything, yet.
As for the grafics, I dont know if they're your'se or not, but theyre very nice and simple, and overall fitting with the rest.
Palettes look nice.
Also, really like how you decorate youre levels, similarly to vanilla hacks.
Overall, youre off to a good start, keep up the great work.
Your layout has been removed.
Well, the graphics are definitely not mine (I can't draw to save my life) except for the signpost (see how badly I draw) and I do not know what you mean by 'decude', if it's a good thing or a bad thing.
Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

The Shrine Policy - Always think you're better than me
The storyline is OK, and the level layout is somewhat great too!
Originally posted by shrine
Well, the graphics are definitely not mine (I can't draw to save my life) except for the signpost (see how badly I draw) and I do not know what you mean by 'decude', if it's a good thing or a bad thing.

If you mean the posts of the text's border, they're not bad at all.I you wanted to make GFX, look at others work and try to find a styleyou like.
As for "decude", that was a typo, will be fixed.
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OOPS! I forgot one screenshot in which I was talking about but never realised until now.


It isn't fairly new and I have used it before (in my cancelled hack).


Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

The Shrine Policy - Always think you're better than me
Good Hack, in My Hack, Peach is the Player, also, the Graphics and Status Bar is Good, level desing is good, i'm played the actual version, is awesome!
Just to warn those that the current demo is void as I gave the hack a complete overhaul (due to the loss of my stuff). I shall have more screenshots of the first world as soon as it is completed.
Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

The Shrine Policy - Always think you're better than me
I'm really liking this so far! looks very interesting, hoping to see more soon. Keep up the good work!
Yeah is Interessing, the Level Desing and the Music Selection is Good
Here is the sneak preview of W1-1 in action (music is subject to change):

Check it out.
Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

The Shrine Policy - Always think you're better than me
Looking good so far. Just a few things need improving:

1. At the start players wouldn't know whether to jump down the pit or not. I would put in some kind of arrow to indicate this.
2. 0:49 looks a bit empty. Add some more decoration there and maybe a few pipes with some Piranhas.
3. The jump at 0:50 is kind of blind. Put in Coins to guide the player.
4. The jump at 1:00 could be annoying. I'd move the top corner up one tile so Peach can get to that pipe more easily.

I'm liking the level so far and the status bar looks good. I like how you used the copyright symbol as a Coins icon.
Yeah, the Desing of First Level is Very Good !
Here are some more screenshots for this hack demo (which should be released towards the end of the month). I'm gonna need some helpers who can help me fix the midway point issue and some beta testers but I'm putting some last touches first...


Some (easy) puzzles...


Is it water...or is it air...?


Yoshi hitches in for the ride...


Mushroom madness...


The first castle...
Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

The Shrine Policy - Always think you're better than me
Looking good so far. My only concern is that the mushroom columns' palletes are bad. Use the custom palette to change it to the normal palette (i.e Vanilla Dome 4). You draw ExGFX better that I do. If you want drawing help, then look at this hokey-pokey "Tutorial" to go back to college and learn ExGFX.
Well, hardly of the graphics are mine, they're random people's work. I'm still a beginner at drawing. Thanks though.
Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

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Peach's Game Hack Updated...?!

What Here Hacks Demo, New Peach Melba the Good Work!!
I love you! I'm a girl.

As it snows, the atmosphere is very unstable and lightning keeps hitting me. ㅠㅠ

I like the cartoon character of the girl the most.

This place will update photos every month.
Well, here it is...

It's TestDrive.zip in My Files (I don't know how to link it)
WARNING: This hack is very amateur and only works on SNES9X 1.53

EDIT - I really need to learn how to do stuff. *sighs*
Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

The Shrine Policy - Always think you're better than me
Well, I've had no luck in fixing the Midway Point issue so the main demo may or may not be released. Tell me what you find about the Test Drive.
Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

The Shrine Policy - Always think you're better than me
Close this thread. This ain't going nowhere.
Melba: The Peach Saga - basic concept of 'hub' world finished

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