First of all, the hack was a bit too short. 1-level hacks are fine as long as they are long enough, but this hack took about 6-7 minutes for me, which isn't that great. Either try to make your hack a bit longer or add more levels.
Also, two things about screenshots:
- you should submit more screenshots, showing different areas of your hack
- the only screenshot you submitted was unnecessarily resized and edited, read this to learn how to submit proper screenshots.
Mario can die in the title screen which leads to glitches.
Several cutoff tiles on the overworld (water + ground). Also, why is there water in the volcano?
I'm not sure why is vertical camera movement not allowed, and the pipe + lava combo create cutoff.
More cutoff (bones+lava).
It's pretty weird how Mario can bump into lava sometimes and he doesn't even get hurt.
This 3UP Moon was a bit...khm, easy. They're supposed to be hidden.
Don't use red Buzzy Beetles as Spinies. It's a bit distracting and unprofessional.
Stacked Munchers = no.
I suggest you to do the following things:
- Read the Hack Submission Guidelines
- Watch this video
Also, two things about screenshots:
- you should submit more screenshots, showing different areas of your hack
- the only screenshot you submitted was unnecessarily resized and edited, read this to learn how to submit proper screenshots.
Mario can die in the title screen which leads to glitches.
Several cutoff tiles on the overworld (water + ground). Also, why is there water in the volcano?
I'm not sure why is vertical camera movement not allowed, and the pipe + lava combo create cutoff.
More cutoff (bones+lava).
It's pretty weird how Mario can bump into lava sometimes and he doesn't even get hurt.
This 3UP Moon was a bit...khm, easy. They're supposed to be hidden.
Don't use red Buzzy Beetles as Spinies. It's a bit distracting and unprofessional.
Stacked Munchers = no.
I suggest you to do the following things:
- Read the Hack Submission Guidelines
- Watch this video