You're doing a bit better Abby, but there are still some issues to fix.
The ledge on the right is still cutoff. Also, wrong corner tile at the left.
Originally posted by WhiteYoshiEggRemember:
Two free lives this early is a bit too generous. I would recommend getting rid of these 1up mushrooms, and moving the Dragon Coin over to the cloud platform.
Another wrong corner tile.
The cement blocks create cutoff in the water. Also, another bad corner tile.
You do realize you can extend those shooters down, right? But that's beside the point. Using them with cement blocks creates cutoff.
You can die here by glitching into the cement blocks if you walk onto the springboard while Super and/or riding Yoshi.
NO. The player should
never be able to die like this.
Cutoff nets, but worse yet, you're forced to ditch Yoshi here. The player should
never be forced to ditch Yoshi under any circumstances.
Another cutoff net and bad corner tile.
If I hit this midway point and die...
I fall to my death upon re-entering the level. This is a
big problem since the player can no longer complete the level.
Easy 1up mushroom. You should probably hide it somewhere else or simply get rid of it.
Lag. Also, the yellow pipe below Mario is cutoff.
Sprite memory issues. The springboard that was supposed to be here didn't spawn, and now I have to wait out the timer.
I might be missing something very obvious, but if I didn't bring the P-switch from the beginning of the level, I would have been stuck here and forced to wait out the timer or commit suicide.
But worse yet,
you once again forgot to place the goal tape. This means I am forced to wait out the timer or commit suicide anyway.
Finally, you tell me not to enter the second level...
... but I am still able to enter it anyway! Now I'm stuck again, and have to suicide/wait out the timer to escape.
It would be nice if you fixed everything I showed you here.