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Hack Removal: Yoshi: The Wild Egg Capsule Chase - Demo 1 (v6)

Hack Name: Yoshi: The Wild Egg Capsule Chase - Demo 1 (v6)
Length: 5 levels
Author: StripeyDope - Submitted by: StripeyDope
Fixed errors, made a new OW, and made a few other changes. Enjoy!

Reasons


The fat red lines show where the bottom of the land should be. The thinner red lines are where you could put lines down the side. The red circles are some lines that don't need to be there. There is a corner tile circled in blue that shouldn't be there, and that bush thing looks bad. You could draw some graphics for it, since using the edge tiles doesn't look as good.

Yeah, I know I'm picky. :o


Bad corner tile on the top right corner of this ledge. You are going to have to draw more graphics for it, since it will have to be half ground half empty.


There are a few places where you can touch the opposite side of ledges like this. You can't tell what's holding the player back.


After reaching the pipe after the goal, the sublevel then spits me out here. At least make it a pipe exit, because Yoshi appearing out of nowhere after going in a pipe makes no sense.


Something was hurting me here, but I couldn't tell what. I think it was a fuzzy, but I can't see it due to sprite issues.


"Yoshi's Lake" was really short; it only took me 46 seconds even after looking around for stuff. Also, the first part is just running over bridges, and no enemies.


I know I'm picky when I say this, but tile priority can be an issue. You can also prioritize the ground, but if you die, Yoshi will appear behind the ground.


domiok isnt special enough to have his name capitalized A lot of people don't know this, but the pawprint actually has two tiles that go above it as well, so the the middle two 'toes' aren't as small. Compare to the original Super Mario World message box with the pawprint.



I really had fun playing your hack, so your level design is quite good (just improve a bit on the lake level). What I've pointed out here is pretty much every thing I noticed, so fixing this stuff should guarantee an approval next time.


Have a nice day.