4-1 is done. In this level you has to spin jump the green turn block to get to the end of the level. Oh by the way this level has a secret exits.
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EDIT:The Level name is Spin Jump The Pokey.
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Originally posted by toad64
Luigi Boss Fight!
This is the Boss of World 3 in Toxic Castle the last level in world 3.
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This is the Boss of World 3 in Toxic Castle the last level in world 3.
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Those parentheses make that look very confusing... Also, is it just me or did you get the Luigi fight idea from Ersanio's creepypasta hack?
Yep, yep, these hills are perfect.
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Hey check out of my desert background.This desert background is for 4-2.
-Check out of my update version of my desert background. is not new just a update-
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-Check out of my update version of my desert background. is not new just a update-
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That looks kind of weird and empty. The fake HDMA gradient looks kind of abrupt, too. The pyramids look flat, the sand and sky are both empty, and the sky looks like a flipped version of the sand.
I agree with Chillah. This is a decent attempt but surely not a decent result. Here are some tips to fix that:
- Don't mix those 45° squares with the water rocks to make your pyramids. Just use the latter, and have one side of the pyramid in light and the other in shadow, instead of that strange perspective of yours.
- If you use a fake HDMA gradient, make it longer. For the one you chose to render nicely, you should at least add two color shades to the top.
- Said fake gradient should be a little different from the ground in terms of palette or otherwise everything will look the same. Use a very light type of blue, or a deep orange maybe. Try to imagine WHEN does the scene takes place.
- To have the BG look less empty, put some smaller pyramids between the big ones, and make them lighter: they'll look like as if they were really far away. You can also add small near-white clouds, too.
- Don't mix those 45° squares with the water rocks to make your pyramids. Just use the latter, and have one side of the pyramid in light and the other in shadow, instead of that strange perspective of yours.
- If you use a fake HDMA gradient, make it longer. For the one you chose to render nicely, you should at least add two color shades to the top.
- Said fake gradient should be a little different from the ground in terms of palette or otherwise everything will look the same. Use a very light type of blue, or a deep orange maybe. Try to imagine WHEN does the scene takes place.
- To have the BG look less empty, put some smaller pyramids between the big ones, and make them lighter: they'll look like as if they were really far away. You can also add small near-white clouds, too.
Originally posted by toad64
4-1 is done. In this level you has to spin jump the green turn block to get to the end of the level. Oh by the way this level has a secret exits.
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EDIT:The Level name is Spin Jump The Pokey.
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EDIT:The Level name is Spin Jump The Pokey.
looks very bland, especially in the later screens.
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Hey 4-2 is finish so you can play 4-2 just for feedback.
Edit: Here the screenshots.
Edit:2 The level name is Very Hot Desert
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Edit: Here the screenshots.
Edit:2 The level name is Very Hot Desert
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Okay as good and original these levels are, just change the plot. It makes it look like a NSMW:T12MO wannabe. Maybe something like UMW: The 10 Star Roads?
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Are you actually taking any of our advice and using it? Seriously, if you're not even going to do that then what's the point? We're not going to bow down at your feet just because you're using custom graphics, patches, etc.
You may have some skills, but if you don't learn to communicate with us and actually acknowledge the feedback you're given, then people will lose interest in your hack. I mean you haven't even acknowledged the plagiarism claims.
Usually when I get feedback, I praise it, no matter if it's good or bad. It's what makes you say "Hey! Maybe what I'm doing isn't the best thing." So far, from what I've seen, the levels don't look that interesting and your overworld is a mess. The perspective doesn't make sense, plus those floating blocks are annoying. Get them out of there.
Sorry if it's a few days late and this seems ranty, but it just had to be said. I've seen a lot of people like this and sometimes, it gets a bit annoying.
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You may have some skills, but if you don't learn to communicate with us and actually acknowledge the feedback you're given, then people will lose interest in your hack. I mean you haven't even acknowledged the plagiarism claims.
Usually when I get feedback, I praise it, no matter if it's good or bad. It's what makes you say "Hey! Maybe what I'm doing isn't the best thing." So far, from what I've seen, the levels don't look that interesting and your overworld is a mess. The perspective doesn't make sense, plus those floating blocks are annoying. Get them out of there.
Sorry if it's a few days late and this seems ranty, but it just had to be said. I've seen a lot of people like this and sometimes, it gets a bit annoying.
Click here to enter the world of mediocre!
I keep PMing you about changing the plot, but you just ignore me. I'm trying to help you, but I see don't want that.
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What will happen: You will upload this to the hacks section and all of this work will go to waste because it is a blatant rip off and won't be accepted.
Originally posted by toad64
You Can now suggest plot because Pixel-Gon Gamer want me to change the plot.
Well we all wanted you to change the plot.
Anyways here's mine, Ultra Mario World: The 10 Star Worlds. This is how the opening cutscene could go.
Somewhere in space consists of 10 Star Worlds, each containing a different energy. However one day a group of aliens began taking all the energy, to form blackholes to destroy the universe, and make their own empire.
You can still keep the levels you're working on, just replace the BG with a starry one.
I could draw the alien GFX for you, and do the OW for you.
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You should change the title screen, because it looks too similar to G.D.'s hack.
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